Through a peer assessment lesson, I received this feedback from my teacher and my peers, which i think will be creative and help me to continue to develop my rock magazine to my best capability. 

After receiving my feedback from my peers and teacher, I will edit my front page, contents page and double page spread according to the feedback.

I will firstly change my front cover, and I will do this by making the main image bigger, this will hopefully make the magazine look fuller and more like an actual rock magazine. I will also change the colour of some of the text that is on the front cover, such as the quotation that the cover model says in her interview.

I will then change the contents page, by making the front cover and contents page flow together, so I will do this by changing the colours to be the same to make it look like it's been taken from an actual magazine. This will hopefully make my magazine look more official and professional. I will then put some more images of different people on my contents page, this will make it look like the magazine features more artists and that we have had more interviews instead of just the cover model.

I will then change the double page spread; I will do this by making the main focus of the double page spread, the image, central to an A4 piece of paper, so I need to distinguish the fold that would have been in the actual magazine. This will hopefully make my magazine look more focused and more like an actual rock magazine, instead of just a poster in a normal magazine. I will also add some more shapes, and these will be a particular colour coinciding with the clothes that the cover model is wearing, so purple.